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August 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
very good start. keep it up
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November 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOW I need more of this story...you must write many many more pretty little chapters...you've got a great style and some serious skill...don't give up on this story...I figure if at least one person likes it then it's good enough to keep going right? I don't know mabey that's just me...but I think you should keep going.
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August 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
aww poor rogue
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January 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
"...and he was such a gentleman in a way she couldn't put her finger on."
'I gotta piss...'
Ahahahahahahahahahahahahaha and HA!!
'I gotta piss...'
Ahahahahahahahahahahahahaha and HA!!
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January 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great lead in. I loved it!
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August 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hmm... I kinda like this version. And I definately think you should add more to it. I'd like to see how it all pans out and if it were possible, in this situation, for them to "work it out". I'm a sucker for happy foofy endings.
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April 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love it. I think it is a great start please write more. I am looking forward to the next one.
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April 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ooooooooooh! I hope you add to this soon!
Very well written!
:)
Very well written!
:)
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April 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
More More More i need more!!!!!!
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March 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
its a great story you have a real flare and a way with words. keep writing, even if it is just the next chapter