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for Just Do It

by mshelly

schedule July 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
is this it? man i thought there would b mor.
person ennsaiyn
schedule February 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Don't know a better way to die...man or woman...fyi I'm a woman. That was such a sweet release *sniff* ;_;
person sarafimm
schedule February 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I was a little disturbed by the original ending of #41. I'd just started getting the comic and it was my second issue. I was a bit surprised and startled (in a somewhat good way) that this comic seemed a bit more realistic. Now that I've got THAT out of the way. Oooo! Squick! I thought about the poor kid. The fact that he didn't get to live his life, he had plans and hadn't even lost his virginity. Welllllll, I guess this story solved THAT minor deficiency! And if Wolverine was going to kill the kid, I guess at the top of orgasm would have been the best thing. I would've probably written the same thing although not as well since I don't have much experience writing m/m. There is one thing that disturbs me though and it wasn't addressed in the comic (or this story for obvious reasons). Wolverine MUST have been in pain. The chemicals the boy gave off ... they had to have HURT!

Thank you for the read!