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for Behaving Badly

by sumthinelse

person coldqueen
schedule November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow...I like this fic...but some of these things are f*ed up...poor Remy...I still love him...it's tarnished though.
person Psychotikitten
schedule September 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE the way you write! I read a lot of smut, and reading finely written smut such as yours is a pleasure, no pun intended. I really liked 'Behaving Badly'. I like it so much, I think you should add more chapters! Please?

- Dee
person Spook
schedule February 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i love this fic.
truly, it's one of the most well-written ones out there, and it isn't just random smut! it's actually pretty refreshing, in that aspect. awesome story, keep up the good work!
person lolita
schedule February 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow. You are an amazing writer, this is a fantastic piece, I am reading this and seeing characters in a completely new light, but not one that is unbelieveable, which is what is so appealing about this piece, it shows that we all have a dark side, even if it's one that we keep hidden - woah praise to you, you managed to make me think a deep, deep thought. I hope that you still have some more ideas because I love this.

lita
person ennsaiyn
schedule February 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
poor Remy he goes through more shit than people realize. Loved it..thanks especially 'Logan's Run'...every woman's fantasy.
person TKD
schedule February 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I *don't* like Remy (I know, *everyone* likes Remy...so sue me ^_~) but I am sympathizing for the little shit here. Never thought of him using his charm powers - which I've often thought were a bit hokey - in a way that would guilt him out. I liked Logan offering a shoulder to cry on - or at least a sympathetic ear. It was just how I'd imagine Logan would handle such a situation. I *still* don't like Remy though....
person TKD
schedule February 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oooooh, you're mean! Or at least your Kitty is. I was starting to worry that you'd forgotten this, and I nearly missed it today b/c so many others posted after you updated. Poor Kurt. Now I *really* want to know what the end result of this is.... You definitely got Kitty 'behaving badly,' that's for sure. Hope there's more to come - though I sure wouldn't complain if you continued this one.
person morgannia
schedule February 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
awww - that was rough, for Kitty & for Kurt, i can't decide who i feel worse for. As a devoted Kurtty fan, that was painfully realistic, i actually read that particular chapter 3 times, before reviewing. One of the better one-shots than i've read it quite sometime. congraor aor an excellent chapter.
person rubberduck
schedule February 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow. these are really thought provoking little scenes. not at all what i thought about when i read your title and summary. i thought a little extreme violence or a bit of non consensual sex, but these are actually deep character studies. i can totally see ororo being that aloof ice queen and enjoying the untouchable status. flaunting herself and so sure that she won't be called on it. a tease if you will. poor rahne. felt sorry for her. i know what it's like to have a crush. i'm sure most do, but i just never had the chance to transform into a dog and spy on them. lol. darn my luck for being a duck. it's hard to choose a side between kurt and kitty. both acted badly but kitty was conciously aware of it. a lot of these scenes would do well to make into their own little stories and the kurt and kitty one has my vote to grow into a longer fic. anyway, keep up the great work.
person TKD
schedule February 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Poor Hank, being tormented like that. Then again, it's probably better than nothing. You know, I can actually picture Ororo doing something like that too - especially after reading Ultimate. Can't wait to see the rest of the team behaving badly. ^_~ Though I must admit, I *had* sort of hoped for something a bit more...tawdry...for the Elf (yeah, I know I'm bad) - any chance you might have more than one scenario for some of our heroes??? Regardless, quite an interes loo look at everyone. Looking forward to more.