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person LaviniaSavant
schedule February 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i laughed until i stopped.





then i laughed some more!
person Sadie Hyde
schedule February 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is great. Truly hysterical. Was it hard to misspell on purpose? Man pole? That's great. This is really funny. I spelled Jimaine's name wrong in a story about Kurt but I fixed it later. Myisn\isn't a virgin either. NOw I'm paranoid about my story. Though I hope I've avoided some of the major cliches. This is really brilliant. You should do more.
person em
schedule January 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It's good, but I think you're giving theragerage mary-sue writer too much credit.
person AmandaLee
schedule January 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This was a great parody! There are actually a lot of writers out there who write things similar to this, and don't even realize they're writing mary sues. Great!
person Marvelous
schedule January 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Funny as all hell. So true, and yet so very painful. Great job of capturing the feel of some very bad fics--you've clearly spent your time in the trenches mucking through the worst of the worst. I love the weird shifts in verb tense, the improbable character reactions, the description of your plucky heroine's hardscrabble childhood, all of it. Fabulous.
person Kasey
schedule January 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Dude. That was freaking hysterical. OMG, I'm still on the floor laughing...I'm literally kneeling on the floor as I type this. Wow, I needed that. Thanks!