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April 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
XXXXXXXXXXDDDDDDDDDDD ::falls over laughing:: I LOVE this story! It is THE best!
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April 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Truly amazing. You've inspired me to write one of the like for my own fandom that is plagued with Mary Sues. Truly perfect!
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April 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
omfg teh hart <3
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March 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ehh...good to know that you know your cliches but this falls a tad falt. You're just dishing out the cliches right after saying they're cliches. Perhaps you could work a bit harder on mocking them.
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March 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Tique, darling? You are my *hero.* This is THE funniest thing I have read in a long, long time, with certain points of hilarity that will keep me chuckling for weeks. Thank you *so* much for writing it.
Hearts,
Quinn
Hearts,
Quinn
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March 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, my goodness! What a brilliant piece of work. It's amazing how much crap a person must sift through before they find a story written with an ounce of intelligence. Don't get me wrong, I have nothing against original characters in general, but if a writer is going to write in a particular fandom, they ought to at least investigate canon and maintain the rules set down in canon. I'm tired of OOC mutants and these ridiculous characters that remind me of Chuck Norris films from the Eighties.
Your message has been beautifully sent. I laughed so hard I cried. Thank you for making this statement. I'm not naive enough to believe it will bring an end to terrible Het fanfiction (or slash with Gary Stu taking dear Mary's place), but I hope some young writer's read it and take the message to heart. ~Cs Nis
Your message has been beautifully sent. I laughed so hard I cried. Thank you for making this statement. I'm not naive enough to believe it will bring an end to terrible Het fanfiction (or slash with Gary Stu taking dear Mary's place), but I hope some young writer's read it and take the message to heart. ~Cs Nis
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March 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, man. I was laughing within two lines of the actual crappy story. The word "wow" has never been so hilarious. I also loved the completely obvious statements like, "using his telepathy," and the fact that Empressaria is better than everyone at everything. Logan's ability to improvise in a situation lacking appropriate holes was also great. I think I may be in love with you.
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March 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
omg, this was the best chapter EVER!
i love how they randomly high-five each other after the gangbang, that's the best.
who WILL Empres...what'shername pick????
i love how they randomly high-five each other after the gangbang, that's the best.
who WILL Empres...what'shername pick????
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March 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
::screams:: the sopping wet lovehole of doom!
this was hilarious
i love anti-mary sue fics
they rock my world
hahaha...meatpole...
i need a shower just from reading that word...
this was hilarious
i love anti-mary sue fics
they rock my world
hahaha...meatpole...
i need a shower just from reading that word...
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February 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hehehehe...
That was the greatest Mary-Sue parody I've ever read, and you even provided a spiffy list of fan fic no-nos!
BRILLIANT!
Alright, I'm done.
That was the greatest Mary-Sue parody I've ever read, and you even provided a spiffy list of fan fic no-nos!
BRILLIANT!
Alright, I'm done.