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September 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
this was so awful it made my phone crash and restart. you have done your job and then some.
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July 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh god I'm glad that shit was intentional... although now I feel the need to go through and microscopically analyze my owns story to avoid the horrors on your checklist 0.0 (cough) Not that it's that bad, but still.
Seriously, I've read a few fics on other sites like this... *shiver* 12 year olds should not be allowed computer access.(
Seriously, I've read a few fics on other sites like this... *shiver* 12 year olds should not be allowed computer access.(
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January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh god! i recommend this for anyone whos ever been pissed off by a mary sue story! the fuck scene in chapter two had me almost crying! the ear thing sent me over the edge! you are amazing!..enough gushing already? i loved the fake typos too...very nice!
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September 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm laughing too hard to be able to think of what I want to say. Oh god, my sides hurt.. Logan put his penis in her EAR!! I think that was just.. Oh god.. I'm dying over here. Oh man... Thank you fellow Mary-Sue Hater for this wonderfully BAD story!!
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August 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
... Oh My God... that was the funniest pardony of Miss. Mary Sue. XD
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August 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I hope to kami this is a joke ficcy....XD
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June 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lmao
this needs a chapter where she gets abducted by the Brotherhood and gangbanged by them, then rescued and gangbanged by the X-Men again. and she gets through what would normally traumatize the crap outta any normal woman because she's Empryserria or however you spell it! woot, this was hilarious...
this needs a chapter where she gets abducted by the Brotherhood and gangbanged by them, then rescued and gangbanged by the X-Men again. and she gets through what would normally traumatize the crap outta any normal woman because she's Empryserria or however you spell it! woot, this was hilarious...
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June 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha! *clutches sides laughing* That is the funniest thing I've ever read!
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March 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my, I laughed so hard while reading this! You have captured MarySueism in a beautifully hilarious verbal portrait. I hope I don't see anyone high fiving for awhile, I will NOT be able to restrain myself. You have created a truly enjoyable parody. Her ear? Oh my... Oh, and I do not consider this story making fun of others, it does not single out any specific author or story, it just conglomerates some of the 'best'. I actually found your story while reading reviews for a Mary Sue story; it was referenced as more information on bad fics and Mary Sues in general. I'm glad I did, I needed that laugh right about now, thank you.
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January 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ha ha ha ha ha that's one of the best fucking stories i've read, i love it it's really very very funny so i hope you can continue it please thanks c ya