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for Learning the Language

by Blu

person KittyNin
schedule August 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love the image of everyone sitting at the table more or less properly.... but Logan's there, dirty and half naked, with that expression that clearly says, "Humf."

And I loooooooved that double entrede at the very end. Very nice, very nice.
person CeeCee
schedule September 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very playful story. It was interesting seeing Logan from Piotr's POV. It felt like it was based on Uncannyverse, too, which I love. The old stories with Logan, Piotr and Kurt's friendships were great, and this was too.
person PX
schedule October 24, 2002 at 12:00 AM
Very well-done story!! Not only was the quality of writing top-notch, but so was the story itself... I very much enjoyed the more realistic set-up for the characters, the way everyone interacted was very believable and realistic, and the focus on Colossus learning English is a nice little something that's proving to be interesting to read. Not to mention his interaction with Logan :) I'm going to read the next parts right away!