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for More Than the X Can See

by sarafimm

schedule May 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is so good. I can't wait for you to update. Please do it soon.
person sarafimm
schedule July 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
In response to Princess Alexandria's question, I thought about adding a chapter or at least a scene where Angelique meets more of the X-men, but after discussing it with my Beta, it was decided it wasn't essential to the plot. So, consider there was a bit of appreciation (and drooling) on Angelique's behalf as she sees the various men and women (X-men and trainees) walking around in (skimpy) bathing suits and shorts. If you didn't notice the time difference, she did stay poolside for a while ;)
person Princess Alexandria
schedule June 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like this story, and hope you update soon. One thing I don't get is that she's a bisexual, yet we never see her notice the gorgeous women around the mansion? She was in a hottub with Ororo for gods sake, something had to register.
person ennsaiyn
schedule February 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm loving this story, I started it in the group and it's going very very well. Keep up the good work.