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Yay! You updated! And here I didn't check for a couple of days. Glad you're back to this. Glen is quite interesting, you've obviously done some homework on him. Makes it much more interesting and 'real'. Like the description of the car trip too. Looking forward to the Glen/Kurt conversation I just say. Gotta have some pretty good insights after living so long I'd think.

Excellent chapter. I'm reviewing! Please keep writing? Can't wait to see what the deal is w/Logan's friend - I like that mutation, quite interesting. Also can't wait to see how things go when Kurt and Roisin finally pull out all the stops - that was *very* interesting there. Elf just needed to unload a bit, did he?

Pumpkin,
I just read chapter 18...you don'td ANd ANY help. It was creme. Keep it up. Looking forward to further tes.tes. LC

Nothing laughable about your smut - believe me, I've read truly laughable smut. Very nice. Poor Kurt though, he didn't need any more crap in his screwed up little life. Can I slap the shit out of Roisin - and Logan too, for that matter?

*poke* It's tomorrow now. *G* Sorry, had to nag just a bit. Smut ahoy? It's been great w/o the smut mind you, but a little smut about now wouldn't go amiss....

Well damn. You made me a happy bunny with all those chapters. It's still a good read and I can't wait to see what happens...I have a feeling the whole Logan/Roisin and Kurt/Roisin thing could get interesting, to go along with the already interesting COH thing. Btw, didn't realize you were setting this post-Draco arc. I'd assumed it was set pretty close after the whole Holy War fiasco. Anyway, I hope you have more coming soon, *really* want to see what's coming next.

Never really thought about Kurt in this way before. Now, all I'm thinking is that a guy who's been training to be a priest would have a lot of built up tension. Love the new chapters...keep it coming.

Spot on! *Smiles*

So far so good. I really enjoy the latest tension created by Logan bursting in on your twntrantrals... you keep delaying and inconveniencing the final realization of their attraction which I find engaging... it keeps me reading... give up the goods too soon and I would lose interest as a reader, as I imagine you might as a writer... The more human aspects of your OC are quite entertaining and well wrought... the clumsiness, the drinking, the freaking out, the sexual playfulness, but the mutant aspects of her character are much less defined and rationalized. I still don't quite understand how she makes clothes or how that ability is realized, it all seems more magical than mutant, which can be fine too... its just off a bit to me... Also the irony of her mutant appearance (cat-like) and her clumsiness feels a bit heavy handed. However, the most important thing I can say is keep writing! Add more when you can. You've got a greaginnginning that I am thoroughly enjoying, and I'm ready for a great continuation!

ACK! All I can say is that I hope you write *really* fast. What a place to leave it. Those damn psychos! Like Kurt needed any more guilt on his poor fuzzy head - and where did they find a little blue fuzzy to crucify...? *sigh* I hope the elf gets to kick some very serious hiney before this is over - wouldn't mind if Logan did a bit of disemboweling either, now that I think of it. You've done a good job of building tension and setting the scene, that's for sure...