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for Risque

by Marikosan7

schedule January 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Scredcrediably evocative it was almost wrenching to see them interrupted. And the vorted Lebeau family.. what madness have they entered into, to warrant such a terrible threat? You're a weaver of mystery. Please. don't. stop. now. :D
schedule January 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, sweet Peter. That was a beautiful touch, especially the details of her room.. and the clasping scene. ooh, ahh. That boy talkin' about 'pity the man..' was funny. Could almost hear her say; "I shall make it up in other ways." lol. That should have made the lad stumble on the stairs. lol. As it was, we fans were quite giddy. Bravo!
schedule January 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
-flustered, gasping- Thank the goddess for the fountain, we all needed a dip after this humdinger. *fans herself* Here's to going as quickly as possible to Tokyo. Oh, my.
schedule January 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I remember that issh with Gambit on the bow of the ship, lookin' like fabio-the pirate! hehe. The threat of his family, mingled with the need to belong... and then Ororo's slayer comment to them... OOOHHH-weeehhh! Lick your lips kinda moment. I wish you could write for Marvel, dear. You do so much more than has been done lately (or ever) imho. T you you from the bottom of our hearts for this glorious, tender and moving fanfic. Gorgeously tempting.
person ara
schedule January 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, good chapter. Aw, poor Remy. His 'family' just continues to drag him into their schemes ans messes. At least Ororo's got his back. And I'm slightly mad at Charles for his behavior. He's acting too much like an ass! (Just my opinion) ^_^
person Saki
schedule January 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Off to Brazil--take me with you!!! Okay, enough on that. Interesting chapter. I felt Xavier actually redeemed himself when he was talking to Scott. He really loves his child but but he's not perfect. And Remy seeing his father was high drama. I better go find all my X-Men back issues and read up again on this Guilds. Good stuff.
person tdg
schedule January 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm soooooo lazy right now I can't write much of a review. Just wanted to say, this story and every chapter is off the hook fabulous. That's about it. =)
person Anon
schedule January 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Dynamite! At least your stories have the pairings I love and support...sigh. ^o^
person Yawn
schedule January 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Nope, doesn't get much better than this. Killer chapter and plot. Too bad for Remy his 'family' keeps drawing him back into trouble. Well, at least Storm's got his back. ^_~
person ara
schedule January 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, field trip! Okay, kidding. Remy and Ororo off to New Orleans and thankfully without the other X-Men to interfere. More alone time means a closer relationship. Hint, hint. ^_~