rate_review Reviews

Wow!!! You continue to come through and you do not disappoint. This story is so complex and it's very intelligent. I come away having not just read fantasy, but also thought about the relationships, the plots, and overall sense of the chapters. I really cannot wait for more from you! :)

You are freakin' amazing!! All this excitement-on the edge of your seat stuff is the rolls royce of writing. I'm chuffed and honored at the dedication, thank you thank you! I can't imagine life without a fix from Risque now. Incrediable writing! Bravo. BRAVO!

*Blows kisses to author* Outstanding. There really isn't enough GOOD fanfiction involving this couple and I've looked! You're sadly my only fix. So please keep the chapters coming.

Since I can't review at FFN for some unknown reason--lousy f***in site, I'll start here. I really love this story! Very descriptive and beautifully written like always. I can practically imagine the scenes in my head. I love the tension and romance you are able to convey between Ororo and Remy without drastically changing the dynamic that makes them such good friends. Besides the dash of adventure and the fights has my attention. Lol. You rule!

Jean and them have a right to worry--especially since Remy and Ro can't stay out of trouble! And that's why I love them. I'm curious to know what Ororo saw that the end. And are their troubles in the jungle over? Update. =D

*plays omnious music* Dun, dun, dunnnnn! What in the world is happening to them now? All this suspense is bad for my poor old heart. Lol. Great action, romance and everything in between. ^^

Two words. AWE-SOME!
Sigh, okay that's not right, but grade A chappie anyway.

hehe.
Oh my garters
Yes, she said
Humdinger gravy!
I'm gettin' wed!

Betrothed as beloved
to *Risque* divine
seduced and charmed
by chapter 9!

Marikosan; darlin'
givin' StoRmy desirin'
dodging loud arrows
that Cupid's been firin'??

Down in de forest
trembling with heat
swathed in innuendo
hearts miss a beat

Persued by unknown
no chance for escape
here's to Remys perusal
of Stormys landscape!!

ooohhh... ahhhhh. ;) A feast was this chapter! Glorious. Tempting. Darn near explosive
at the end. First Asayssays that you gotta suck out the poison straight away, so um...
Storm, *wiggles eyebrows*, where was he hit, again? ;) :P :D
**applauds you loudly and sincerely**

Awwww, those two just can't catch a break. If their romance isn't interrupted by tension and weirdness, then it's some crazy person shooting poisonous darts at them. ::shakes head sadly:: I always hate it when that happens. Anyway, I'm a pretty impatient person, so UPDATE! UPDAAAATE! Will Ororo and Remy admit their feelings for each other? Will they find the mystical whatever it is? Will the dart do lasting damage to Remy's lovely thigh? The suspense is killing me. Very good fic.

Since I alreaevieeviewed at FFN, I'll just say this, dyn-no-mite!