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lol, update soon

i can actually get the feel of teenage urgency from this chapter. jubilee's confusion and want fighting for control over her emotions. very well portrayed. however from the way the story is blocked (without any ss bes between paragraphs) i found myself having difficulty reading it. the story jus just like one long paragraph without the spaces. that's easy enough to fix, though. keep up the great work.

CooL...update soon pLease =]

this is a very touching story so far. it was annoying at first since i had no clue who the two main characters were but now that i know it's very good. kind of wishy washy there ain't i. lol. but with this last chapter you have jubilee saying 'good girls don't...' when has jubilee ever been a good girl? that line is out of place but otherwise i really like the story. keep it up. :-)

ahhhh! *screams* The suspense is kiLLing me. eh...yeah. Update soon pLease

I can not even believe that I didn't think of Jubilee! I mean I knew it was another girl for the longest time but I never thought of her. Geez! Anyway I loved it. I read almost everything you post but i think that this is the first time I have ever reviewed. I know. I suck. But you rawk! Great story er stories.