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awwwwwww. lol. how sweet. honestly, that was a wonderful little bit of fluff. i really liked it. duck's honour. um, i don't know what else to say except for the fact that i await your next bit of fiction. until then.....

quack

*gasp* wheeeee...lol, update soon pLease

that was a rather neat scene. i liked the fact that evan and ray and scott were sent to the professor's office. i'm very surprised he was angry at jean though. it was a nice moment for jubilee. but at the end it got confusing. i didn't know who was saying what. it was just sort of jumbled together. i don't know if you really want to, but perhaps cleaning that up a bit would be good. overall, i'm liking the story a lot. can't wait for more. have i said that already?

*pouting* Bad Professor, he didn't let them have seconds. And I won't even
go into how I feel about Jean (and assorted narrow-minded ppl) in this fic.
*sniff* The meanies.

And of course Bobby's gay, he's far too cute t str straight. And it depresses me
to say so.

I'm going to go now, and twiddle my thumbs or something.

Ja Ne,
CybrEm

Happy Happy Joy Joy? *pause* ok, don't know where that came from. Eh...yeah. update soon

*dramatic music pLays* anywho, Love the story so far...update soon

I love this story. I am so pleased to this new trend of GOOD femslash fanfiction. For the longest time, all I could find was crap clearly written by pimply-faced turds of boys. But you have written this so well. First, it's nice to see a realistic approach to teenage homosexuality, especially lesbianism (which is largely ignored as a legitimate issue by the main stream). Second, you have written the sex scenes so amazingly wellhat\hat's what sex between girls is like: sort of weird because you've been told it's wrong, but mostly so much easier and more comfortable than heterosexual sex. I really want to see how things turn out. The suspense is great; it could all turn out wicked happy or end in abject misery. Either way will be great, so update soon, please!

like i'm sure i said before, this is a good story. and like i'm sure i said before, it's very sweet and tender. perhaps a bit too much. i do like the growing love and affection between jubilee and rayne, but (and here is where i might seem a bit perverted, hehe) i'm missing the smut. sure there was a bit of sex in this last chapter but it was very vague. you knew what they were doing but it was like it was shroude mis mist. i missed the details. you keep alluding to jean figuring things out and now some other characters. i'm curious as to how everyone will react. can't wait for that to come out. until next time...

Nice chap, update soon

It isn't our fault that adults in positions of power seem to become more and more
idiotic as time goes by. My own parents raised me to be open minded and accepting
of everyone regardless of race, age, sex, and personal preferences. But recently I
found that they don't approve of homosexualit
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Sure as hell rocked my world. I guess it's a good thing that I know I can't change
someone else's mind if they aren't willing to let it happen. So I just go on believing
that people have a right to do whatever they want, as long as they don't hurt anyone
in the doing of it.

Don't mind me, I tend to get philosophical when I'm tired and/or feverish. Right now
I'm just slightly feverish. It doesn't change my POV, it just makes me more outspoken.

Ja,
CybrEm