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Cool story, but it's making kitty out to look like she's competing for the title of 'Worlds biggest slut.

Where the hell have ya been girl?!! :) As usual gettin' people going again. Brava! I really can't wait to see Logan have a go at the female version of himself.

About time you got back to this, X23 is next? you really have no hang ups do you? Given that she's technically Logan's 'sister' or 'daughter'. You said you didn't like Jean? Given that she was the only one raped and didn't like it so far. What next you going to have the Brotherhood jump her on her way homes and to do her what they did to Mystique?

I was wondering, could you make an alternate chapter 43/44? Only this time actually have Kitty phase away from Scott and Logan and what happens when they catch her? Thanks for reading I hope you consider.

Boy oh boy...and girls. You sure give guys a lot of credit for being fully loaded for that many go-arounds. I mean, wow, I haven't seen that much seaman since my dad showed me pictures of his navy days. Anyway great writing and all that, I'm constantly surprised at how many girls take advantage of this site...I guess I'm living in the wrong part of town. Well I'll let you get back to um...whatever it is you do. And feel free to hit me up, I'm new and could use a guide through these uncharted waters...okay that sounded lame, tuff.

Are you ever going to get back to this? And what happened to Chapter 30? It's not here plus Ororo is a bit underused in this fic.

I'll update the Sabre sexual beating if you update Monster...and Dirty, hey all's fair in sex and torture.

I've nothing against the occaisional PWP, but I like the characters to actually BE in character. A sex scene has more impact if it is somewhat believable; this just gets repetitive and a bit dull. You can slap any old name on these people and it would make little diffrence.

On the positive side, the sex scenes themselves were not badly written. You did not give the men 16" dicks (OWW, by the way) and you refrained from using strange or distasteful euphamisms. You also remembered that men do not ejaculate gallons at a time, and the possisons seemed actually possible. This alone puts you one up on many PWP authors.

I must also note that mechanically your writing isbad.bad.

Please find room for a plot next time. I just couldn't get through 66 chapters of pure smut.

I absolutely can't wait for my fellow wolf girl to get delicioulsy devoured by Logan (licks lips with anticipation).

I know you want Scott to fuck the holy hell outta Veiyn but I have a big surprise for Scott and also Jean will get what she truly deserves, cause I hate her so. Now Veiyn will get hers by Mr. Summers cause his pride will be hurt along with something else of his.

Sabre is gonna regret deeply for making Wolvie upset and Tala will regret enjoying seeing ole Sabre being tortured. I was thinking of bringing in someone a tad bit wilder than Sabre and Logan put together what do you think?

BTW can you do a chapter with Logan, Bishop and 'Ro, that would oh so nice.

A Kitty/Scott/Rogue sounds hot.