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for The RainBow Connection.

by MonkeyHead

person me
schedule December 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
umm.... when the professor said he would continue torturing her as before, you meant tutoring, right? Gee, i hope so ><
person me (again)
schedule December 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I loved this:

"He smiled and took her into his arms biting her ear, “I’m sure he can’t read
our minds from this far away.”

~ Oh yes I can! ~ P "

Also, the part where Logan interrupts Piotr. Please don't stop!
person me (once again)
schedule December 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
mrr. That was nicely done, most of the time the OCs steal the show instead of becoming a part of it.