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Well this could get interesting... Jamie slash Jamie. I read a fic like this once.

Proper story etiquette dictates that if you are producing a chapter story, then, at the very least, at the end of each chapter that will be continued, you should put TBC (To Be Continued). Also, it might not hurt to put WIP (Work in progress) in the summary until such time as it is completed, at which case you'd change the indication. Also, you should check the spacing on your story. It makes it seem longer than it is.

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How many times have I changed my name on this thing? Oh well.
Firstly, WHAT THE HELL HAPPENED TO THE STORY?!?!?!?!?!??! Did you not update another chapter or did it upload wrong or something? It's really annotying when such a cool-sounding story just breaks off like that.
But I'm here to beg you. I'm begging you to either add the next chapter if its multi-chaptered or try uploading it again to see if it works better next time. Pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease? It sounded like such a great plot too; I've never actually read one like this so please try! I wanna know what happens!!!!!
Okay, my whining is done now.
Fake xxx

Wouldnt it be masterbation...? Enyway, grate story!