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February 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is good. The alluded detail on the rape is enough to give it seriousness without detracting from the story. Interesting plot. Would prefer future chapters don't focus on all the other characters and their views/opinions, but stay with the central figure. Would like some more background on the "Frail" of the story--why no relatives have showed up. The fact that she has to face reality and resume life ... deal with her personal belongings, who's paying rent, etc. To the author: Please continue.
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October 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Finally someone writes a story that's more in line with the Sabertooth of old. I've got nothinginstinst the bad boy or reformed Creed stories,but just like the good old fashion good verus evil stories once in a while.