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January 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Fucking lovely. Well written, good ending, just an all around great story...
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November 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
loved the story . including the ending.awesome
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February 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
God, what a good story. Very well written, and I couldn't help but laugh when she said she was gay. That was priceless. Great job!
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February 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ouch!! Go Jenny!! Hehehe, I didn't even see that coming. But very good so far.
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February 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful. I can't really think of anything to add- really a great short story. You should be proud. :)
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February 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well, I've got to say it, that *kicked ass*. Great ending. It's been so long since I read the beginning that I don't remember if there was anything to indicate she was gay earlier. What a way to totally kick the pathetic loser in the balls. Should I be worried that you have such a great handle on Creed? The characterization for everyone was just spot-on for the whole thing. Great work.
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February 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow.
not something i'd read again, but something i'm glad i did. well done.
not something i'd read again, but something i'm glad i did. well done.
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February 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great story...I have never che at at the end of a fic before now. It was wonderful.
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February 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Very powerful and very...creepy isn't the right word, but it's the only one coming to me at the moment. Despite how profoundly disturbing this is, I'm glad you haven't forgotten it. You've got me on tenterhooks here, wondering what the deal *is* with Creed and this poor kid. I'll be watching for the next chapter. (On this and your other 2 fics - how the *heck* do you manage that? ^_~)
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February 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
And here I thought you'd forgotten this one. I'm impressed - I won't even *try* to have more than one fic going at a time. Knowing me I'd lose track of which I was working on or lose interest in one if it got hard or something and I'd never finish one or both. ^_~
Short, but telling bit there. Nice look into Jean and leaves me *really* wondering what Creed's deal is.
Short, but telling bit there. Nice look into Jean and leaves me *really* wondering what Creed's deal is.