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for Persistence of Memory

by Nemain

person Dracena
schedule December 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Another great story! confused about family tree but i'm probably thinking far too much about it. :)
or just sleepy reading. at any rate great ending loved how the girls got together and pretty much took care of everything
can't wait fot the next one!
person Kiki
schedule December 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*gasp* How can you stop it there?! Evil, evil Mer. But I still love ya, you just have to update this soon!! Not that I doubt you would do that anyway, just feel the need to say it anyway. Wow, you know I really can't believe how far along this series has gotten. And near the end of every story I worry you'll be moving on or something and won't write another sequel, but you always do. I imagine you'll have to stop sometime, but I'd like to entertain the idea that you will continue untong ong part WITHP. That was cute, albeight short... well, in comparison to some of this stuff. Waht was my point? Oh yeah, I can't beleive you cut it off like that!!!
person CybrEmly01
schedule December 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
It's also in a song. Turn, turn, turn (to everything there is a season). By
the Byrds, I think. I used to have it on tape.

And, to quote one of my favorite authors, "I love you with a passion
heretofore reserved for chocolate and hotties without shirts… ",
Shiva, chapter 23, author's note. By Nemain.

Yes, I'm re-reading them all. In order this time.

Ja Ne,
CybrEm
person CybrEmly01
schedule December 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*holds hand to forehead* Chapter overload. I don't think I can write
a review for all that in one shot. It's pure splendiferousness, in any
case.

Ah, and I was wrong. That chemical is Tryptofan, or is it Tryptophan?
Like it matters. Tetracycline is, I've tol toln ann antibiotic. It's in
certain eye drops. That's why I remembered it. It was mentioned in
some goofy movie from the 80's.

Anyways, Yay! and MORE! and Wahoo! and stuff.

Ja Ne,
CybrEm
person dracena
schedule December 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
i've been reading all your stories for the past couple of weeks now. they are amazing! it's hard to find readable x:evo fanfiction.
just wanted to let you know i love the stories and if you ever need anywhere else to host them i've got plenty of space and would love too!
~christi
person cygna vamp
schedule December 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I was just re-reading Todd's mental conversation in chapter 11 and for some reason it reminded me of Golem from The Two Towers. You know. "Masters is my friends! No, nobody likes you!" Thought it would be fun to point that out.
person CybrEmly01
schedule November 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Yea. That lil' dinosaur has to be like 16 or so. Most
reptiles are dead by then. I think. (Not an expert on
reptiles. Creepy things.)

Chapter Good. More chapter!!

Attack of Emlystein's monster.

Ja.
person CybrEmly01
schedule November 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Jay and Silent Bob rule And so do you.

So, what color -was- Jubilee's hair? I lost track.

I had a lovely Thanksgiving, thank you. Lots of pie and stuffing
and mashed potatos. Did you know that there's a chemical in
turkey that makes you sleepy?

Tetra-something-or-other. I'm thinking Tetracycline, but I'm often
wrong about the scientific names. Especially when I haven't had it
drummed into my brain.

I'm just a font of useless information lately. =D Like it's not normal.
Well, normal for me. "Normal" being a relative term and all, like time.

Anyways, lovely story. Wonderful chapters. Fabulous plot twists. And
bad, bad reporters. =P

More soon please!

Ja,
CybrEm
person cygnavamp
schedule November 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Yay Rogue! Queen of the Handjobs!
person CybrEmly01
schedule November 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*Sighs in pleasure* Mmmmmmmmmmmmmm. Don't change a
thing about your writing style. I'm obsessed. It draws me in more
than any Soap Opera ever has or ever could. But that's a given,
especially since I can usually predict what's gonna happen in Soap
Operas.

The people who write television shows have their work cut out for
them with little me guessing their story lines before they air. Takes
alot of the fun out of it for me too.

And Jubes's hair, green. If anyone who knows me could see my
expression right now, they'd be terrified. (This look just screams
"I'm up to something")

Oh, and don't let anyone corrupt your vision of the -verse. I like the
way you have it working. I'd probably still like it if you made the Earth
spin the other way for a while too, I'm that obsessed. But they did it
in Superman, so go for it if you feel like it.

Ja Ne,
One Very Mellow CybrEm