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i'm not one for words but great story so far i hope you continue it for many more chapters. it's about time logan got happiness, as for scott ......... well i didn't like him much anyway. i didn't hate him it's just his character is to uptight, always go by the book, i'm always right jerk. anyway theres your review and keep up the good work!!!!!!!

This is EXCELLENT work. There is much detail and the love scene *fans self*....I only wish I had written it.
Keep up the good work and I look forward to more of your work.

Good story...but you needmakemake more paragraphs to I the readers won't read stuff twice...I know I did >_<

Sorry for the typo...I meant to make more paragraphs so your work isn't jumbled all together, it makes it better to read. Also, it sorta ends very abruptly...you may need to upload it again.