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for Late Night Work Out

by amandalee

person SoulMore
schedule March 28, 2014 at 12:00 AM
FAN!~
person sarah
schedule July 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Very hot and I love the ending and how Sabartooth calls him beautiful and says he will there.
person Anonymah
schedule November 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
An interesting concept, but I didn't really enjoy this much. Magneto and Sabretooth were SO out of character. Your descriptions are good, but you need to work on your dialogue. Keep it up. I'm sure someday you'll be a good author.