rate_review Reviews

i read this fic forever ago, back when it was on fanfiction.net, i loved it then aa i love it now. i love the pietro/lance couple to begin w/, add a healthy dose of angst an you have an awesome fic. the thing that made me remember this fic was the last couple lines i dunno what it is but i LOVE that ending, lance is an actual person whose having real problems and has real feelings, those last sentances capture the situation and his hurt perfectly. i'd really like it if you would write more, i'll be looking


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This fic was so well written. I'm not much for the Lance/Pietro pairing, but the depth you put in to their emotions and the descriptions was overwhelming. I love the passion and true love that you put into the Wanda/Pietro relationship, something we don't get to see a lot of. I thought thsi was extremely well done and you should keep writing!

not enough twincest

i loved it it was so well written and the angle was interesting

That is really good. I like Lance, I like Pietro. I like them together, humping the dayloights out of each other. Not too kee Wan Wanda but the whole Twincest thing peaks my interest. I like it, but I feel so bad for Lance. I want to hug and take him away. If Pietro loves Wanda, so be it, just don't hurt Lance in the process! *pout* You did a good job, not many people can pull off a good Test est fic. ^.^

Some paragraph breaks would help. I really love this pairing after watching No Good Deed. The episode almost begged for it.